Composing the Messages:THE APPEARANCE AND DESIGN OF BUSINESS MESSAGES

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Lesson 16

Composing the Messages

You have gone through the planning steps. You are ready to compose. Composing is the process of

drafting your message. Your first draft is a bit difficult to write. But at least you have brought the most

important information on paper. If you have time, look for opportunities to improve your ideas. When you

feel confident that you can achieve your propose, begin to write.

While composing the message, no two people do it the same way. Some people follow the outline and move

from one point to other. Other go in a more circular style, putting their ideas down in less fixed

organization. The best equipment available nowadays is a computer which allows you o make changes.

Style is the way you use words to achieve a certain overall impression. The right choice depends on the

nature of your message and your relationship with the reader.

Revising your Message

If possible, let your writing "Cool off" for a while before you begin to evaluate and revise. In this process

you add necessary information and remove unnecessary one. You also look at the organizational approach.

You also check all seven Cs in it.

Besides, ask the following questions to yourself:

1. Does your message accomplish its purpose?

2. Have you chosen the most effective organizational plan?

3. Are your points supported by adequate material?

4. Is your language complete, concise, considerate, concrete, clear, courteous, and correct?

5. Have you used variety in sentence structure?

Editing & Proofreading you Messages

Editing means revising your message that is still in rough draft. It not only involves correcting spelling,

grammar, punctuation and similar errors but also means much more. Editing requires looking at a written

message critically to see if revising the content will improve it. Proofreading means checking the final copy

to make sure it is free from errors.

Editing your message also means checking all paragraphs for good topic sentences and sound structure,

grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Sometimes you will proofread your document several times to be sure

that you have not missed any errors. Even minor mistakes, such as typographical errors, can reduce the

effectiveness of your message and undermine your credibility.

Those, writing in a second language can take one more step in proofreading material. Read your written

material aloud. Most people who speak a second language are more competent in oral communication in

their second language than in written.

If you identify weaknesses in these areas and correct them, you will be making the finishing touches that

ensure that your written communication will be as close to perfect as possible.

THE APPEARANCE AND DESIGN OF BUSINESS MESSAGES

The electronic revolution is changing the way we communicate, and these changes include formats and

conventions of written communication.

In the more traditional forms of written communication, your receiver will form an impression of you

based on the overall appearance and format of the message. The medium used most often for written

messages to person outside your organization is business letters.

Elements of appearance that help produce favourable reactions are appropriate stationery and correct

letter parts and layouts.

Business Messages

Stationery & Envelopes

A good company uses a paper which is most often at least 25 percent cotton content. Its quality is usually

20-pound weight. The standard size is 8½ by 11 inches. Some legal firms use 8½ by 14 inches. The colour

should be white, cream, or light gray.

Letterhead

A letterhead is a printed paper with the name and address of a person or organization. Modern

letterheads usually occupy no more than 2 inches at the top of the page. Letterhead information should

include the name, address, telephone number, etc. Sometimes nature of business and name of department

are also included.

Azad

69 Garden Road Mall Karachi, 74000 Ph 111111

Envelops

Return addresses of the senders, often printed like the letterhead or, if necessary, typewritten, should be

in the upper left corner of the envelope. Address should always be typed in block form; with all lines

aligned. Information in the address should be listed in the following order:

1. Name & title of receiver

2. Name of department

3. Name of Organization

4. Name of building (if relevant)

5. Street address & Flat number or post box number.

6. City, state & zip code or postal code.

7. Country (if outside the country)

Standard Parts of the Letter

Most business letters have the following parts:

1. Heading

2. Date

3. Inside address

4. Salutation

5. Body

6. Complimentary close

7. Signature

8. Reference Section

Standard Parts of the Letter

1. Heading

A heading shows where the letter comes from. If letterhead stationery is not used, the address, not your

name, is typed above the date 2 inches from the top.

2. Date

Usually the date is typewritten two to six lines below the last line of the letterhead. Date sequence preferred

in America is month, day, year - March 6, 1998 - with the month spelled out. Others prefer day, month, and

year 6 March, 1998. Date in figures - 3/5/98- should be avoided as it can create confusion.

3. Inside Address

The inside address should begin with the addressee's name preceded by a courtesy and/or professional title.

It is written two spaces below the date on the left hand margin. The order of items is

(1) Courtesy title,

(2) Name, and,

(3) Executive or professional title, if any.

All parts are typed single-spaced.

Mr. Ahmed Hassan, Principal,

Government College,

Lahore

4. Salutation

Salutations are typed below the inside address and two spaces above the body of the letter. It is an

expression of courtesy to put your reader in a friendly frame of mind.

For Men;

For Women;

Most Formal:

Sir,

Madam,

Formal:

My dear sir,

My dear Madam,

Less Formal:

Dear sir,

Dear Madam,

My dear Mr. Khan,

My dear Mrs. Khan,

Friendly:

My dear Haleem,

My dear Mah Noor,

Dear Naeem,

Dear Sara,

A comma or colon should be used after the salutation. Gentlemen should be used in writing to a company,

organization or any group of men and women. "Mesdames' `or' Ladies' should be used when writing to an

organization made up entirely of women.

5. Body

Most letters are typed single-spaced, with two spaces between paragraphs, before and after the salutation

and before the complimentary close. A short letter could be double-spaced with additional blank line spaces

before and after the date and within the signature area. When second page is used, addressee's name, page

number, and date is written at the top.

6. Complimentary Close Body

If the letter begins with a formal salutation (Sir, Dear Sir) it will close with "Yours faithfully".

If it begins with a personal name Dear Mr. Khan, it will close with "Yours sincerely". Yours truly or

cordially are also used.

Informal closes as Warm regards, Best regards/wishes are also used. A comma is used after complimentary

close.

It is related to the salutation, so the same degree of formality should be used in it. e.g.,

Salutation

Complimentary Close

Dear sir,

Yours sincerely,

Dear Madame,

Yours sincerely,

Sir,

Yours respectfully,

It is written two spaces below the last line of the body. In full block format, it is written on the left hand

side of the page.

7. Signature

Always type your name after the handwritten signature and the position in the firm. It is better to give

courteous title (Mr, Miss, etc.) to avoid confusion. A letter should always be signed in INK.

Very truly yours,

Ahmed Hassan

(Mr) Ahmed Hassan

General Manager.

Four spaces should be given between the complimentary close and name.

8. Reference Section

The reference section may include information about the message composer, the typist, and sometimes

word processing data. Only initials are used. They are typed two spaces below the name and positions of the

person signing the letter.

AS / mb

It means Ahmed Shibly composed the message and Mahmood Bilal typed the letter.

Optional Parts of the Letter

When appropriate, any of these optional parts can be included:

1. Attention line

2. Subject Line

3. Enclosure(s)

4. Copy Notation

5. File or Account number and mailing notation

6. Postscript

1. Attention line

To send a letter direct to a person or department, attention line is used especially when we don't know a

particular person or know only the person's surname. Attention line is written between the inside address

and salutation two spaces below and above respectively.

2. Subject Line

It helps the reader to know at a glance what the letter is about. The subject line may include or omit the

word subject. It is placed below the salutations. It may be started from left hand margin or indented. The

typing may be capitals or lowercase and underlined or all capitals. For example;

Sub: Monthly Report

3. Enclosure(s)

An enclosure or attachment notation is included to remind the reader to check for additional pages of

information. The enclosure is typed single or double space below the reference initials.

4. Copy Notation

When persons other than the addressee will receive a copy of the message, it is noted by writing `C', `PC',

`Copy' or `CC' followed by the names of these persons just below the reference initials or the enclosure

notation.

5. File or Account number and mailing notation

File or account number and Mailing Notation to aid in filing that file, loan, or account number be typed

above the body of the letter.

6. Postscript

Sometimes an extra message is added at the end of a letter. It may be something important or some

personal comment. Write Ps or Ps and leave two spaces before the first word of the postscript.

The following are accepted postscript styles:

m/s

Enclosure

Ps. Mail the card today!

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